Dear Sir,
I am a student of 2nd year Bachelors in Electrical Engineering. Although, I like my majors but I always has a desire to learn about computers from an early age. I recently found college advertisement about 6 weeks computer course training starting from 25th of this month. As I have a passion to acquire computer knowledge. I want to enrol in this program when I read the full pamphlet it mentioned the participant should have prior elementary certificate or diploma in computers if he/she wishes to enter. I will elaborate the reason why I am writing to you.
I believe in getting with the all aspects of computer technology while I was a child. I dreamt of it everyday but due to my family's poor financial condition this desire got shattered. I have to pursue technical subjects because they wanted me to have a stable job as early as possible.
I request you to please consider my case as a special one so that my dream can be fulfilled and I promise I will manage all the expenses of this course. Even I promise you, I will work hard and give it my all.
Thanking you,
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste 73
- You are going to another country to study You would like to do a part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help Write a letter to your friend In your letter give details of your study plans explain why you w
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any 89
- You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call Write a letter to company Complaining about this Giving your reasons Asking for bill to be change 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...Although, I like my majors but I always has a desire to learn about computers from ...
^^^
Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ining starting from 25th of this month. As I have a passion to acquire computer kn...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te the reason why I am writing to you. I believe in getting with the all aspects...
^
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...omputer technology while I was a child. I dreamt of it everyday but due to my fam...
^
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ogy while I was a child. I dreamt of it everyday but due to my familys poor financial co...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...al condition this desire got shattered. I have to pursue technical subjects becau...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ave a stable job as early as possible. I request you to please consider my case ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53731343284 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74645792123 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646766169154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1703777005 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325624957308 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105810980574 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572321859611 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179820408916 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891115973137 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.