Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am kushal rana, presently working as a financial analyst in india. I just have learnt about your seminar, scheduled to be held in December 2019 in Sydney Australia, through an advertisement in a newspaper.
I am very curious to attend this workshop and need some further detail.
The seminar schedule and was not mentioned in the newspaper, hence i would like to know about the duration with time so that i can organise my things in well advance. i would be glad you could offer a brief of the programme: what aspects of IFRS will be covered during this period, will there be any hands on experience or will it just be a theoretical session ? I will really appreciate if you can share the total cost for booking my seat. Lastly, as i will be travelling from india, can you please share information about accommodation, will you provide any living place ? if not,kindly share the detail of nearby hotel with probable cost per night.
Thank you in advance for your response. i am looking forward to attend the seminar.
Yours faithfully,
kushal rana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, lastly, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7807486631 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67095690829 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663101604278 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9909400881 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2727272727 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189825307443 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694782583768 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380908317101 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111211898039 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375925306041 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.