Dear John,
Hope you are doing great.
I am writing this letter to let you know that I miss you so much because stay in your place is extreamly comfortable to me and I had accidentally taken your ipod back home.
During my stay, everything is perfect. The room you prepared for me is so lovely and the breakfast is unbelieveable delicious. No wonder your wife said your cooking skill absolutely deserved any compliment.
Please forgive me the fault that I made is the ipod you allow me to use it in your house that I mistakenly packed with my stuffs and brought it back to my home. I packed and ship it to your address already. The post man told me it will be arrived next week, hope you can forgive me this fault.
With you and you family I had great time so hope you could invite me back to there next holiday.
Miss you so much.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3950617284 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34502914974 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0190046527 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7272727273 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28900571686 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112924413731 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076220708235 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176905108624 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525533088826 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.99 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.