To manager,
I am writing this letter no. 477 for introducing a well-educated person that is Mr. Rajesh Khanna who has obtained immense expertise in Digital Marketing. I am willing to recommend you for the head of Digital Marketing Executive.
The first time, we were met at the Fresher party in our college. Since our friendship is getting older with the passage of time. Besides, Both Mr. Khanna and I had a co-worker in the last organization.
Evident, Mr. Rajesh has vast knowledge and expertise in Digital Marketing. He is excellent at devising a plan and executes key strategies in a marvelous way. He has attained a benchmark in the Digital Marketing stream. Even though, He is awarded as best digital Marketer in last year. Meanwhile, He had nominees of Best leadership Manager of the year.
Prima facie reason to introduce him is that capable to tackle with rival’s strategies. He has Not only managerial skills to bind co-workers but also standardized communication skills to influence, motivate to peers. I hope we can gain progress, fulfill our weakness and threat through this masterstroke man. I would glad if you could arrange a verbal interaction with him.
I am looking forward to your acknowledgment.
Regards,
Pawanchopra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...head of Digital Marketing Executive. The first time, we were met at the Fresh...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...et at the Fresher party in our college. Since our friendship is getting older with th...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a marvelous way" with adverb for "marvelous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sing a plan and executes key strategies in a marvelous way. He has attained a benchmark in the Dig...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...last year. Meanwhile, He had nominees of Best leadership Manager of the year. ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rrange a verbal interaction with him. I am looking forward to your acknowledgme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17073170732 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07904973868 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639024390244 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9264330519 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.25 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8125 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105373440529 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308113756363 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539143938394 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552717939442 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745079747405 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.