Dear Rakesh,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of spirits. I am doing very well this side. I would like to inform you that I want to sell my car and I am writing this letter to give you the features of my vehicle.
Although I absolutely adore my car I am planning to vend it because I am in a dire need of money due to a personal emergency.
To tell you about this particular vehicle, it is in excellent condition and well maintained. It had been driven only for 40000 KM so far. The model of the car is a Ford Aspire sedan and I bought it last December. It has an ample amount of boot space and leather-covered seats. Last year, I had installed a brand new stereo system which is as good as new. It also comprises an inbuilt GPS tracking system to track it, in case of stolen.
I wonder if we could meet this weekend to discuss further. Please do not hesitate to ring my doorbell.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Sudheer Kumar Motakatla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pirits. I am doing very well this side. I would like to inform you that I want to...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lasts'?
Suggestion: lasts
... is a Ford Aspire sedan and I bought it last December. It has an ample amount of boo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27807486631 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45485417419 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9659370676 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.1428571429 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201597502284 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564906350847 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644305798475 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690902801821 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682094400099 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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