You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter
1- Say who you are
2- Give details about the accident
suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents
Dear Sir,
My name is Muhammad Ramzy, I am a regular customer in your supermarket since 3 years now. I am writing this letter to complain about a small accident that happened to me yesterday while I was shopping in the supermarket.
As usual, I was buying my weekly groceries when i stopped to check the new cheese type you recently displayed. I was walking and looking to the right while pushing my cart in front of me, and all of a sudden I slipped over some spilt milk on the floor and twisted my left arm. I had to go to a doctor who gave me a pain killer and recommended not to move my arm in any way for a few days.
Although the milk was not spilt on purpose by any of you employees, it is your responsibility to ensure that such accidents do not happen again. I suggest that you increase the number of the working staff in order to spot such incidents the moment it occurs. In addition, a notice sign will be very helpful to alarm the customers of any wet floor so that do not slip over like I did.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
M.Ramzy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., I was buying my weekly groceries when i stopped to check the new cheese type yo...
^
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ramzy
...g from you soon. Yours faithfully M.Ramzy
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27272727273 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47514139935 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622009569378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1159569249 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184901267496 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719135528043 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616785957909 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11179784267 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720649083018 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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