You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letterDescribe the problem with the equipmentExplain how this problem is affecting your wor

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my disappointment over the recent purchase of a network router from your shop. The purchase number is A01134 and the product is manufactured by Belkin.

Last week, I have bought a router and installed at my residence. Initially, everything was fine but after some time the network speed started decreasing. I checked with the connection provider and found out that issue is with the router. The router is not able to transmit the signal from the network fiber cable although the cable is transmitting the high wavelength signals to the router.

Needless to say, this whole situation is affecting my work because I am unable to conduct meeting with my clients on a daily basis. It has been costing me a huge loss of business since last week.

By taking the whole situation into consideration, I want the replacement of my network router without any further delay as it is under warranty period.

I expect a prompt resolution to this matter from you.

Yours faithfully,
Deepak

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93785310734 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74866740874 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649717514124 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1943589174 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4545454545 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134380408242 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540893619325 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536229940563 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647754261554 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359108070526 0.0580467560999 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.