Dear Mr Singh,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in working at our company's headquarter in Auckland for a short time.
Our company has launched new products which we have not started selling yet. As a manager of product department, it is my responsibility to get the detailed knowledge about the product . Hence, I would like to travel to Auckland to access information before the new item will be out in public so that these can be launched in our country soon. This is quite essential to enhance the profits of our branch.
During my absence, my assistant manager will do all job duties. I already discussed my travel plans and office work with him. He agree to cooperate. Rest assured that I will be available on phone if there is any emergency and I made him aware about the responsibilities. Therefore work of office will never be affected during my absence.
Finally, I would really need your support to get the approval of this business plan as I feel launching of new products will bring enormous benefits to us.
I look forward to a positive reply from you.
Yours sincerely,
Gurjeet kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uckland for a short time. Our company has launched new products which we have ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the detailed knowledge about the product . Hence, I would like to travel to Auckl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... about the product . Hence, I would like to travel to Auckland to access informat...
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Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
...avel plans and office work with him. He agree to cooperate. Rest assured that I will ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e him aware about the responsibilities. Therefore work of office will never be affected d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, look, really, so, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77551020408 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72462608668 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668367346939 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9327080913 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143986068705 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493910329659 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519648578364 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786677594025 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505345236962 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.