You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them.
Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
I am a resident from a nearby town and I am writing to inquire about few electrical items that I want to buy.
As I had come across decent reviews about your shops on internet, I am convinced to purchase electrical fans and washing machines. So, I would like to know about the availability of these items at the moment. And also, let me know could you book this items if you are running out-of-stock.
Furthermore, I am expecting a good deal on this products since I am going to buy in bulk numbers. So, I would request you to send me quotation with deals along with accepted payment options.
If I am comfortable with the prices, I would make immediate purchase on next Saturday and apparently, I need your favor in maintaining the stock until I purchase on Saturday.
Awaiting your reply with latest quotation at the earliest.
Thanking you
Harish S
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t. And also, let me know could you book this items if you are running out of stock. ...
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...items if you are running out of stock. Furthermore...
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...thermore, I am expecting a good deal on this products since I am going to buy in bul...
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...s along with accepted payment options. If I am co...
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... stock until I purchase on Saturday. Awaiting your reply with latest quotatio...
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... Awaiting your reply with latest quotation at the earliest. Thanki...
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...with latest quotation at the earliest. Thanking you Harish S
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'apparently', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.182352941176 0.220444632235 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.188235294118 0.167888034529 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0823529411765 0.0606518309736 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0235294117647 0.0506257000042 46% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.129411764706 0.118615021944 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152941176471 0.107062808482 143% => OK
Participles: 0.0588235294118 0.041066498444 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69115017827 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352941176471 0.0385302599488 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0647058823529 0.0714148451538 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0235294117647 0.0191574576366 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00588235294118 0.00930345855455 63% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1070.0 1141.60824742 94% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.134020619 75% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.90322580645 5.53046319177 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78085437643 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.270967741935 0.284621296913 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232258064516 0.211203875043 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174193548387 0.133321485273 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103225806452 0.0843313296314 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69115017827 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622163163488 99% => OK
Word variations: 54.4411714832 62.8969750728 87% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 12.9587628866 69% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2222222222 16.4300151701 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7276762882 44.7399317507 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.888888889 90.9928171075 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.4300151701 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.613754768223 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 7.22680412371 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.4480286738 37.5504026743 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.15517241379 1.13073093955 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292322461151 0.331212695627 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0940438785521 0.0927372745006 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0677690912123 0.0736520305886 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.775972987474 0.662452444078 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.226355748958 0.233577193048 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123557817147 0.122183219658 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565992683763 0.0765303033291 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.105692680513 0.110270004696 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0797476850356 0.120535355502 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124905425549 0.120397337282 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713983567614 0.113578534861 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.54639175258 110% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.0824742268 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.62886597938 38% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 8.25773195876 73% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9