You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a town which is far from your home.Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter:say which electrical goods you wantask questions about the cost of the goods and how to payexplain how yo

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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a town which is far from your home.

Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter:

say which electrical goods you want
ask questions about the cost of the goods and how to pay
explain how you will collect the goods.
Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear...

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about the availability and some information of TP Link wireless router, model number 4z52,3 and TP Link wireless range extender having model number 5DR.

I will be thankful if you can send me a quotation, mentioning unit price for each item, including all government taxes and delivery charges to Dubai. Furthermore, I will like to know about the warranty details for each product separately and I will be very happy, if you could enclose the specification sheet for the product with the proposal. Also, please include the mode of payment in the quotation, such as, current dated cheque or bank transfer or cash on delivery. Whereas, if the goods are not in the stock, please mention the date of availability of them.

I will like the items to be delivered at my enclosed home address between 4:00 P.M and 6:00 P.M.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

James.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...livery charges to Dubai. Furthermore, I will like to know about the warranty details...
^^^^
Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...my enclosed home address between 4:00 P.M and 6:00 P.M. I look forward to hear...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, whereas, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94375 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6601148354 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.443940041 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125888628502 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567208203445 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326099081181 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693697524154 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214858096513 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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