Dear Mr. ABC.
I am an employee in Human Resource department of your company. I want to get your permission to pursue a course in Financial Capital management. this will be beneficial for our organisation. I will elaborate further about this.
IBM is the foundation partner for this training course which is a 6 weeks training in and off campus programme. As you are aware that the finance management of the company is lacking proper and quality staff for work. So, it will be a great opportunity for the organisation to have a great leader to recruit quality team for the betterment of this department. The training course will be a part-time affair as it will help me develop new skills, strategies and a opportunity to acquire the knowledge that will help me become a more important asset of this company and will benefit the company as it will not put an extra burden of finding a new leader for the required job as I will be able to handle both the HR and finance department and help in shaping the growth of the company further.
I need your permission to attend these classes and I promise it will not take away the time. Additionally, it will not hamper my job responsibilities for this organisation.
I will look forward to your answer in the next 2 days as the classes are starting in next week. If I can enrol in or not depends on your decision.
Thanking You,
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...course in Financial Capital management. this will be beneficial for our organisation...
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...p me develop new skills, strategies and a opportunity to acquire the knowledge th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58565737052 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8104287124 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529880478088 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.9456325661 44.8134815571 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 82.2142857143 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321784981259 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113634334318 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526996794916 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180905508191 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432550469 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.