Your best friend just had her first baby. You are currently overseas but will be returning to your hometown in a week.
Write to your friend. In your letter
congratulate your friend
tell her when you will be returning home
ask when you could drop in to meet her and the baby
Dear Allen,
When I heard that you have become a "Mother", I could not believe into m ears! As you know that I have been in the US for a training but luckily I will be back to Karachi by next week as the task will be completed.
It is a great feeling when your childhood friend become a mother. I want to congratulate you and your entire family on this occasion. I am sure Uncle and Aunty will be equally excited on the addition of new member in their house. Although they will not be able to sleep for longer hours in night due to baby's cry, yet they would have no regrets. It would be their happiness and joy which will be all over.
My training classes here at the US will be completed on 26th July and I am planing to take flight on the next day.
Will you be able to meet on 28th morning? I hope you would have taken doctor's appointments for post delivery check ups. please let me know the suitable time to catch up as I can't wait to see you and little one.
Best regards
Salem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n, When I heard that you have become a 'Mother', I could not believe...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...pointments for post delivery check ups. please let me know the suitable time to catch ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...know the suitable time to catch up as I cant wait to see you and little one. Best...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17948717949 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37954243968 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620512820513 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8929837905 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0909090909 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32027181908 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117188954983 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750741205166 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169896393537 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757022017094 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.