Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologize
describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. Renold,
I am writing this letter in response to your complaint regarding the noise from my apartment for a few days.
Well, we are hosting a weeklong celebration of my grandparents' fiftieth wedding anniversary. My siblings along with their families have to come to my house for this family get-together. This is a very special occasion for us and hence it has been difficult to contain our excitement.
I would like to sincerely apologize for all the inconvenience meted out to you. I humbly ask for your cooperation for the next four days. Furthermore, I hope you will not mind us the speakers and our late evening parties on the terrace. I understand the children have particularly been notorious and very loud. This is a rare event and I do not foresee another celebration anytime soon.
I promise that I shall try to keep the volume low and ask my family to be a little more sensitive to our surroundings. Additionally, I would like to take this opportunity to invite you and your family for the golden jubilee party to honor the lucky couple, where they shall renew their wedding vows. It is held in our lawn, on Saturday, evening 5 pm onwards.
Looking forward to seeing you there. Sorry again, for the trouble.
Yours sincerely,
Tom Middleton
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83661129455 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631818181818 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7743328619 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231458111496 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730495822243 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690568534637 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123514120632 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057887622574 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.