Dear Mr and Mrs Jenkins,
I am writing in respond to the letter I received yesterday about the noise that disturbed you last week. The reason was that my roof was leaking after the strong storms of the season and it is urgent to repair it. The contractor that I have hired was working during the afternoon and night, despite I ask him to do it during the morning.
I would like to sincerely apologize for the damage that I have caused to your family. I promise that you will not suffer more annoying noises during the night. Please let me know how I would can amend you after all this disorder that I have generated.
I could solve the problem this early morning. I have talked with the contractor and he agree to work between 9 am to 12 pm to avoid the disturbance. I hope this agreement gratify you and please, accept this chocolate box as a token of my deepest regret for the inconvenience.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully
Mark Paterson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr and Mrs Jenkins, I am writing in respond to the letter I ...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ask him to do it during the morning. I would like to sincerely apologize for ...
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Line 10, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the problem this early morning. I have talked with the contractor and he agree ...
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Line 10, column 98, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
...have talked with the contractor and he agree to work between 9 am to 12 pm to avoid ...
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Line 10, column 160, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...9 am to 12 pm to avoid the disturbance. I hope this agreement gratify you and ple...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eepest regret for the inconvenience. I look forward to hearing from you You...
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Line 15, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you Yours faithfully Mark Paterson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8202247191 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45153116437 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8383425321 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254716206784 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897007603516 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078264079048 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10113346891 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757793151496 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.