Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise and apologise.
Describe what action you will take.
Dear John,
Hope you are doing great. I'm extremely surprised to get a letter from you indicating that you're immensely annoyed to hear some sound, which is produced from my flat. Indeed, I've no idea that you'll be able to hear this enormous amount of sound.
However, as you know, some days ago, a glass of my window in the kitchen room was broken while some children were playing cricket in front of my flat. That is why I'm trying to refit the window in the evening time when I come back from office. It takes a long time because I have no experience on this work and it's still not finished.
Unfortunately, I thought that the sound will not reach to your home but it eventually did as per your claim. Since you have confronted many problems due to the noise, I apologize for this matter. Moreover, I promise this sound will no longer appear from today.
As the work is still not finished, I have decided that a professional worker will be called, who will work in the daytime and the work would be finished within two days.
Once again, I'm extremely sorry for any inconvenience that might have happened for me.
Best Regards,
Nayan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ricket in front of my flat. That is why Im trying to refit the window in the eveni...
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... this work and its still not finished. Unfortunately, I thought that the sound ...
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...ound will no longer appear from today. As the work is still not finished, I hav...
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...ork would be finished within two days. Once again, Im extremely sorry for any i...
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...ience that might have happened for me. Best Regards, Nayan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, so, still, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57487922705 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36213606872 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632850241546 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8132603724 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9166666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222068533929 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718041933365 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710270794412 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111828759894 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695343421984 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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