Dear Bella,
I reasonably hope you are doing well. I am writing to reply on your letter received yesterday. In the first place, I would like extending my apologies for the inconvenience occurred from our side.
Bella these days you apparently have minded colossal sound noise emitting from our flat. We are celebrating a wedding ceremony of my younger sister.Number of vital ritual events are happening. We feel its incomplete without traditional music and dance therefore, sometimes guests requests to turn on the volume and did not realised that it might foster disturbance to our neighbours. I'm really feeling embarrassed that your suffered disturbance because of this extreme music pollution.
Further, our pre-wedding events which we traditionally celebrate at home was aloft yesterday, however you will not investigate any noise now. In future I will make certain nothing will be related like this incident which alters your comfortability level.
Once again please accept my sincere appologies.
I will look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ms.Emma Joy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Number
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'realise'
Suggestion: realise
...uests to turn on the volume and did not realised that it might foster disturbance to our...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...t foster disturbance to our neighbours. Im really feeling embarrassed that your su...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h alters your comfortability level. Once again please accept my sincere appologi...
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...o hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Ms.Emma Joy
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Emma
...g from you. Yours sincerely, Ms.Emma Joy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, look, really, so, therefore, well, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52380952381 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93234367968 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.755952380952 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4565955612 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261400934119 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918004248539 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633611906026 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12287132616 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067610141995 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.14 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.