Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. John,
I hope you are doing well.
I am Nancy, one of your neighbours, residing in 121 sweet, writing this letter to explain the reason of loud noises coming from our house, which are indeed disturbing everybody these days.
Firstly, I want to apologise for this and let me explain my situation in detail. Well, one of our washroom's pipes is leaking , wetting the whole floor, making us unable to use washrooms. As you know, there are two kids in our house , so there is huge risk of falling on the wet floor. So, we are repairing it immediately , which requires the use of noisy equipments . However, It has been two days to repair because there is a complete change of pipes that is deep inside ground, which further require two more days to finish.
Moreover, complete replacement of pipes is necessary, so I request you to understand our situation , though we will try to minimize the noise by keeping the windows closed. Please pardon us for the inconvinience .
Best regards,
Nancy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou are doing well. I am Nancy, one of your neighbours, residing in 121 sweet, ...
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...on of loud noises coming from our house, which are indeed disturbing everybody th...
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...oor. So, we are repairing it immediately , which requires the use of noisy equipme...
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... request you to understand our situation , though we will try to minimize the nois...
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.... Please pardon us for the inconvinience . Best regards, Nancy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77586206897 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56141237081 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695402298851 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1097994916 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169702431269 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532980479109 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635389722054 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109376168185 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647001678562 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.