Some people think that children who are bought up in families without a huge amount of money are better prepared to solve the problems in their adult years. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that children who are bought up in families without a huge amount of money are better prepared to solve the problems in their adult years. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The upbringing of a child is a decisive factor to his/her future development. It has been argued that those children who grow up in less wealthy families are more masterful in terms of adult life. To my perspective, I agree with this statement.

Firstly, pre-teens who come from a lower-socioeconomic background tend to be more independent. Since their parents have to spend more hours on work and bread-winning, leaving little time on family chores. In other words, their younger children need to step up and do housework, such as cleaning, cooking, taking care of brothers and sisters. As the ye...

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