Recently, most people believe that visiting abroad is a latest way of invading one's territory, and as a result it may damage the natural resources and local income or to an extent of causing destruction to a place. However, in my own opinion it does not only create a mess but it will also provide more advantages. This essay will discuss the two sides of the argument.
Let us take a look at the travelers who visited a certain place. They just leave their garbage and ruin the natural habitat of a wild life. For instance, mountain climbing, if an individual will leave their trash in that area ...
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