Write a letter to a college Principal, where you attended a one day computer course and are unhappy about the way it was conducted. Explain what was the type of the course, what happened and what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again.

Dear Sir,

I am Pratik Patel writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction on recently completed course at your college.

First of all, I let you know that I am serving as an assistant professor at GEC College in electronic department since 2010. As I am doing PhD in embedded system, I was searching for the computer course which can help me to provide fundamental knowledge on communication of computer with embedded circuit. In this process, one day I found your advertisement on our college notice board and without wasting time I completed my enrollment process online. As a reputed coll...

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were in very poor condition
were in a very poor condition

can get good reputation from this course.
can get a good reputation from this course.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 225 350
No. of Characters: 1102 1500
No. of Different Words: 141 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.873 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.898 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.934 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 85 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.022 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.626 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.143 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5