Now a days people have many variety and choices for shopping and also have wide options. Online and offline shopping both are very popular and easiest ways but also have many advantages and as well as disadvantages. Now we have many options like stores, malls and big supermarkets with a wide variety of products.
Due to the development and advancement in technology now we can do online shopping by saving time. Various supermarkets like Big Bazzar, Vishal Mega Mart, and many other supermarkets are easily available (with offers sometimes also). By doing shopping in supermarkets we can save our precious time too. like all the needy and required products we can buy from a one single place and mega discounts or gifts on various products. Easily availability of products, good indoor air conditioning and comfortable environment, easy approach, good services with quick response, are some major and important benefits for shopping in supermarkets.
Apart from it, easy and comfortable walking space and less crowded area as compared to the other markets, fresh dairy products are also some advantages of shopping in supermarkets.
Sometimes the frozen products like corns, cookies, breads get expired and some customers having little knowledge buy those products without seeing product information. Same happens sometimes with dairy products also. But one of the main disadvantage of shopping in supermarkets is customers have to wait in long ques for billing.
But on an average shopping in supermarkets proves quiet beneficial, time saving, and effective too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days people have many variety and choices fo...
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Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun variety seems to be countable; consider using: 'many varieties'.
Suggestion: many varieties
Now a days people have many variety and choices for shopping and also have ...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... easily available with offers sometimes also. By doing shopping in supermarkets we c...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...kets we can save our precious time too. like all the needy and required products we ...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'happens'.
Suggestion: sometimes happens
...ithout seeing product information. Same happens sometimes with dairy products also. But one of th...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e happens sometimes with dairy products also. But one of the main disadvantage of sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3967611336 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89727529479 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562753036437 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.11523022 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.538461538 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288267534203 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105827221667 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847288831427 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152293224215 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212465323895 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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