Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?.
THE TOPIC:
Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?.
THE ESSAY:
In recent years, advertising has been gaining more popularity in the marketing of products or services. While advertisements are considered to be advantageous, they can have numerous negative influences.
On the one hand, advertising has brought a wide variety number of benefits in various fields. In terms of commercial activities, this marketing method is considered as a vital part of modern business. It is probably that thanks to the ever-increasing development of media, advertising on TV has become a great measure to attract clients, hence allowing firms to make more and more profits. In additionally, promotions also inform us about the abundant choices we have. It means that we can have more choices and more detailed information about products. As a result, we could select the best goods, which is hard to get without advertisement.
On the other hand, although both commercial organizations and consumers all benefit from advertisements, it still causes several consequences. Firstly, it is obvious that children who advertisers often aim are vulnerable by the attracting content of promoting programs. Consequently, they could put pressure on their parents to buy items advertised on TV. Secondly, advertisers often focus on selling a brand image rather than the quality of products by using glamorous and successful people. Then, customers could be manipulated by the image of models and are persuaded to follow the latest trend.
In conclusion, while advertisements can make significant contributions to a company’s prospect and consumers ‘benefit, they also cause many negative impacts on children and consumer trends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60073260073 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33820438683 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3525233467 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388301845988 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127989208358 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183409085515 0.0667982634062 275% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304188495906 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.354167329983 0.056905535591 622% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.