commercials are ubiquitous, and it is inescapable in daily routine of people. Some people believe that it has negative impact on everyones life. However, others believe that it has been performing as fruitful effects on people lives. In this essay will consider the both sides of arguments and will reach to the best possible conclusion.
Why advertisement has been affecting unfavorably in everyone's life? There are several reasons behind affecting negatively that is, firstly, the most advertisement came through the children on first basis. With so many attractive commercials, marketing has been adversely affected to the children's mind. for instance, Lucrative fast food commercial will led children to buy that particular food which is unhealthy for them. Secondly, commercials motivate the psychological health of women by showing products such as cosmetic roof. This may create illusion to the females mind about the fast fairness to their skins. For instance, USA research academy of the psychology of women's mental health shows 90% of female attract to beauty creams towrds the advertisement. This is how advertisement has negative impacts on people's lives.
On the contrary to the above discussion, There other side of coin, which has favorable impects of commercials. Some adverts are aware about the quality products to the customers and has educate the people to buy a right goods or services from the vendors. Government of India had published an advertisement about the consumer awareness that would suggest customers to buy a product who has qualified sign or mark on the packaging of the products is the good example of advertisement.
To conclude the essay, There are numerous argument regards to the negative impacts of the commercials, however,it has also positive outcomes to the people. Thus, I believe that advertisement is very crucial aprt of our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34006734007 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94198265371 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3153121409 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2941176471 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161713571169 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544482484068 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525251586582 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09241450571 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013847581314 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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