Psychological researches show that many people nowadays start showing sign of inconfidence, tension and the inablilty to control every aspects in life. I believe that there are three main problems associated with it and also three remedies that we can adapt.
Perharps the worst problem stemming from this is for the sake of the betterment of society, as overly stressful people lead to the unable of adverse behavior controlling. For example, in Japan, there is a huge amount of news and reports in which the suicide rate is surprisingly high. This is because of the scores of work that Japanese have to endure on a daily basis create tension not only for themselves but also for the family ans the neighborhood which they are living in. Furthermore, overstress leads to chaos, as any part of our lives is being considered as a single domino. If one collasps, it can make a huge impact that is unbearable. Lastly, we must consider the issue of the society safety, since there is a concern over the striking criminal rates which mainly is because of hateful people. This is probably the most hazardous problem, as criminals who have troublesome are likely to get over frustrated with their lives and somehow manage to find a way to get revenge on what outside world has done to them.
Turning to possible solutions, reduction in working hours being legislated by gorvenment can be an effective tool to ease the tension and boost up the happiness level since now people have more leisure time to do what they desire, may be take part in some art or yoga clubs. A further step would be to encouraging social activities by holding more conferences or classes on how to release stress and live the life we all want which help people to deal with stress . Lastly, supportive family plays a vital role since they are the only one that could acknowledge first and provide aids when needed. This is not something to be hinderred especially when people show signs of boredom and hateful with life do not receive appropriate advice on time.
Over all, the key problems of infufficient control over individual's life can be addressed through a combination of working hours re-regulated, diverse social activity and the empathy of family and neighborhood.
- In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and I 89
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishm 96
- The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create ? What are some solutions ? 89
- Playing a musical instrument is the most important achievement for any child.Personal Opinion, agree or disagree? 84
- Some people think that using animals for experimentation purpose is cruel but other people think that it is necessary for the development of science Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88250652742 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68256976714 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587467362924 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3050520254 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.571428571 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3571428571 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199882056873 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609451975668 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391887991615 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111518407762 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269093105178 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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