It is clear that arts epitomise the fundamental cultural identities in the whole universe. Unfortunately, nowadays, the majority of folks lay considerable emphases to automation, trade and science, compared to arts, which are entirely overlooked. This essay will discuss firstly the relevant explanations on why public are ignoring arts totally, and secondly, the crucial steps that ought to be taken by the regime in order to seduce people towards the art profession with relevant examples.
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Essay evaluation report
since the artist employment is massively impacted by the amount of charity and donations, which they appear to lack conspicuously, that go towards it.
Description: 'they','it' refers to what? Be sensitive to use pronouns.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 358 350
No. of Characters: 1907 1500
No. of Different Words: 235 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.35 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.327 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.82 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 147 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 122 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.025 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.565 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.048 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... almost two thirds of the creators land part time jobs owing to the inconsistent income a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4748603352 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92253534129 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656424581006 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.6281287542 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.333333333 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146878991058 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477287890466 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329870817728 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829369512853 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310766568031 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.