Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Inventing is directly proportional to imaginations, imaginations needs some certain strict demands like silence, attention, acquired book knowledge and place with some restrictions. Some think full independence is must in creating and having unique views on something and I completely agree with this standpoint since I have read and seen these circumstances, which I going to exhibit in the following paragraphs.
Being Artist is admitted as one of the most difficult ways of earning money since there are myriad sacrifices to become a creator or media-man starting from dear people to joys of life. Only few people know about what is in behind of each single maestro, how much they struggled and lost as it is obvious to achieve something we need to immolate something. For example, Jay-z has spent 74 hours on making a single song he explained, it was impossible to let myself have a rest when the wave of flow were coming, by this he made life-time song ever.
According to this specializations’ demands and difficulties we may conclude that it is unmanageable to have state job and be an artist as there would be a lot of tasks ordered by authorities and to be done by one who wants to be. Therefore, most of talented people cannot realize their ambitions fully due to lack of experience come from limited time to work on themselves and get knowledge. As an example, we can take painters who work in Government job as a teacher and grow many popular artists for future. They may get famous if they invest enough time on their prosperity, however, they cannot afford it because of prioritized tasks and responsibilities of job.
Coming to conclusion, according to highlighted points and examples we may get sure that the most time-consuming direction is Art, we need place, condition and enough freedom to create or have extraordinary ideas.
- TASK 1 11
- Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem. 89
- Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas to what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore recieve funding from the goverment in order for them to continue with their work to what extent do you agree 84
- Some people believe that children that commit crime should be punished Others think that parents should be punished instead Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96784565916 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01954085731 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627009646302 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.5507078912 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.5 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156758964586 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558742080962 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253383446162 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088188292448 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225904276843 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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