In modern era, school plays an important role in the education as well as career development. There are series of problems that are pressurising the students in their life concepts and routine. In this following essay I intend to explore various aspects of given issue and pendown my views as a contradictory solution.
To begin with, family problems are one of the factors that contribute the students behaviour. To go in detail, poverty and imbalance between parental views can affect the studies of the students inversely. For example, recently conducted cross study in India explicit the behavi...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...e one of the factor that contribute the students behaviour. To go in detail, poverty and...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...behaviour of the students from both poor and rich family, finally they draw a con...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...r group pressure affects incredibly the students character. Mass media shows an oakward ...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... such programmes and become addicted to these kind of activities. Moreover, drug addiction...
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Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
... my opinion, awareness programme should given to the parents and the teachers regardi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in measures and it can avoid the arousal of bad character. School can be equal to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...School can be equal to heaven as someone told in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, in addition, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88043986839 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5040329528 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2352941176 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0690339914467 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024086842507 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269216730073 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417455484041 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343980481242 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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