In the modern world, people justify their ownership, every family has one or more car. they think it represents their status in the society. due to this, it increases the crowd on the road and it leads to traffic congestion.
In my opinion, the government should provide free transportation facilities to reduce the crowd on the roads or government should impose such laws or rules which help in reducing traffic congestion.
On the other hand, people should be that much aware that they prefer public transportation for going to shopping or work.
The government should provide other means of transportation system rather than only buses. for example, metro trains are introduced in various developed and developing countries to reduce the traffic jams on the roads.
in Delhi, now metro cover all areas and people also prefer to use metro trains rather than buses. metro trains are safer, faster and most important have less fare as compare to buses.
As government should provide free public facilities 24/7 to certain distance because it is impossible to free the all public transportation facilities, it will hamper the economy of the country. so at a certain distance, transportation should be free, so that people prefer using public transport rather than going on their own vehicles. carpooling is another alternative to reduce the traffic congestion.
in conclusion, it will only happen if government and people both are aware and are working together in the same direction.
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thankyou. it is valuable.
thankyou.
it is valuable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18257261411 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77940785758 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522821576763 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8600308973 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0769230769 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159728148404 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056258245786 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551205946471 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761271060633 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597411350032 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.