High salary is one of the prime importance for choosing a job because money can provide us a luxurious life with needs, but bank balance can not give use relex, happy, healthy life which one is only possible by job satisfaction. That's why , I strongly agree that job satisfaction is more important than a high salary.
Firstly, "Money is the floor of evil". High salary is normally bringing tension with money. If anyone getting high salary than he have to work so hard with too much responsibility because of hard work responsible he or she can't take care of his or her own health. Even can't give proper time to family. No body can be happy without taking care of ownself and family. That is the reason of taking the side of job satisfaction.
Next of all, bringing success in any career chosing the goal with cool mind is must needed which can be acsive by job satisfaction. Work satisfaction also motirale us to do better. As example, Henry Miller leave his 9-5 daily job for being a writter, and he become one of the most famous writrer of twenty century. So I strongly believe having a job with satisfaction is better than great salary.
Beside of all those, lot of people believe that money is the key of everything. People buy anything with money even happiness.
In conclusion, I want to tell what the happiness are buy with bank balance is only adjustment is more important than salary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: gets
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Suggestion: has
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... with too much responsibility because of hard work responsible he or she cant tak...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ake care of his or her own health. Even cant give proper time to family. No body can...
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Message: Did you mean 'have needed' or 'need'?
Suggestion: have needed; need
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Suggestion: centuries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69879518072 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63027298963 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9362719587 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231040652534 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076174056947 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904164870227 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120014489123 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796238899426 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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