It has been suggested that working in fulfilling job is not as necessary as high wage, even if it does not appeal to person at all. In my conviction, job satisfaction is only way to achieve goals and feeling gratification about life which has led.
First of all, feeling enjoyment by doing desired work which always attracts person to that spot creates satisfaction from life. People take a sense of fulfillment that money cannot give them. Earning big salary but feeling tensed and compromises with conscience never bring happiness during the life. By looking at a high wage and due to unappealing job people lose interest to surrounding and life simultaneously.
Another point to consider is that, job which someone does with wish keeps him motivated and therefore leads to career growth. In addition, accomplishing tasks with better result in working fields blows to climb the career ladder and even last till being leader. Working in fulfilling sphere enhances skills as creativity, responsibility and multitasking. Take one of the most famous actor Jim Carrey for example, he worked at various work places to earn living for his family, even his potential attracts to comedy field. While Jim provided his family, he began performing in different comedian shows and became one of the most well-known actor after acting in some famous films as `The Mask`. Thus, desire to job always lead to career growth and achieving targets which are set up from childhood.
On the other hand, satisfying from job cannot supply family members and do not satisfy them from job which bread winner wants to work. Furthermore, economical condition of family effects to mood and worker cannot give productivity in job even it is satisfying. However, by working in fulfilling job individuals can achieve their targets, leading satisfying life and being successful.
In conclusion, earning high salary can supply family and in some cases, but never bring about happiness and gratification in life which fulfilling job provides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 247, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...cannot give productivity in job even it is satisfying. However, by working in fulfilling job ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19571865443 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78872926506 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.638288659 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11523391474 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041413987034 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033526526009 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772588224107 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293674940045 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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