It is undoubtedly the case that decreasing birth rate and increasing aged people are affecting the developed countries adversely. In this essay, I am going to examine the possible effects of this trend and suggest some of the proactive measures that could implement to overcome this problem from developed countries.
The first step is to understand why is this happening. Broadly speaking, there are number of effects of this. The first and foremost effect of this is on the ECONOMY of the country. If a country have lower birth rate than there will be less working population in the country. It will also effect the productivity of that country. This should be overcome only through migration. The country which have lower youth population may immigrate workers from another developing country to improve their economy level.
Probing ahead, the another effect of this could be on DEFENSE AREA. The country will become less protective and always have a fear in their mind to attacked by another country if the youth population will decline. Therefore, the country will be unable to send the aged people to borders as a security force. So, to overcome this problem, these countries must have technological advancements and good weapons. It will help them to strengthen their defence system.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse while it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this. This could probably solved by the government by making proper rules for family planning and it should be mandated for each and every individual of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, broadly speaking, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05597014925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62093068943 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518656716418 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6185219388 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232195537575 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891094898014 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713363893618 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148603600793 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764932493097 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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