In the contemporary world, shopping online is becoming more and more popular that sometimes is more prominent than the traditional purchase. Therefore I believe the benefits of online bargaining outweigh the drawbacks because of its necessity and convenience.
To begin with, purchasing essential products via the internet gradually dominating global trade. The first main reason is that it brings up the convenience to the customers. Now, despite the different distances, the spenders can search for and select whatever the products on the network just by a mouse click or touching their phones. Especially in the middle of a serious pandemic, online shopping is proving its importance in implementing social isolation. The second reason why buying things online is becoming popular is that it is easier to compare prices and quality. Customers nowadays can go to online shops and make comparisons between the various places that they can potentially purchase from without the annoying crows or hours of queuing.
On the other hand, there are some inevitable disadvantages of shopping via the internets. Firstly, the difficulty of delivering and returning products. For examples, for some specific reasons such as the weather, the distances that can cause the delay of products' delivery. The exact same problem can occur with the returning that some products can not be returned or the returning will make you pay for the shipping charges which you had paid earlier. Secondly, buying commodities online means that you cannot bargain because of the fixed prices for each one.
In conclusion, according to the merits and demerits mentioned below, I cannot refute that online shopping menaces some latent disadvantages, however, in the modern world, the advantages of online purchasing is increasingly overcoming the drawbacks thanks to the technology advancement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45674740484 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86795065901 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1978612425 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160934195507 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554941385348 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560207085762 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970622997017 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507165857323 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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