The bar chart depicts the frequency of eating in fast food restaurants which was surveyed on people living in the USA in three specific years namely 2003, 2006 and 2013.
As a whole, the habitants In the USA mostly ate junk food in restaurants one time a week or from one to two times per month among these studied years.
The year 2006 witnessed virtually the same figure with the one in 2013 when local people consumed approximately 33% fast food once a week and once or twice monthly. The people going to restaurant one time a week for fast food declined remarkably by about 5 % in 2013. Besides, the consumption for fast food once or twice monthly in 2003 began with 30%, which was a little under than being in fast food restaurant once a week, followed a decline before reaching around 33% in 2013.
The Americans eating fast food most in restaurant for several times a week seen in 2006 with 20%. Meanwhile, the percentage of people who ate this food just a few times a year range from about 13% to 15% in the three years. Interestingly, a record low can be seen with merely 3% to 5% people eating fast food every day or never enjoy it.
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- Families who send their children to private school should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43601895735 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37499882895 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54028436019 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.9628191566 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323508866629 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163731078416 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06863109912 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211640024545 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699902197254 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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