The assigned pie charts show average proportions of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in four typical meals that people consume in one day in the USA.
From an overall perspective, people consume too much nutrients at dinner, and sodium is the main reason should be blamed for that. Besides that, most added sugar that people consume from snacks.
It is clear that people in the USA consume familiar amounts of three nutrients at breakfast, all are around 16%. However, percentages of them vary a lot at snacks, while added sugar accounted for the majority proportion of snacks with a figure of 42%, sodium merely stands for 14%, which is 2 per cent lower when compared with saturated.
Moving to the two remaining items, nutrients that people consume at dinner are 3% higher than advising. sodium and saturated fat were main reasons that should be blamed for threatening people's health, to be more species, 43% in sodium and 37% in saturated fat. And added sugar account for 23% of that. After that, people consume at lunch saw familiar percentages in sodium and saturated fat, 29% and 26% respectively. Additionally, added sugar stood for 19% made it inferior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...overall perspective, people consume too much nutrients at dinner, and sodium is the ...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sodium
... at dinner are 3% higher than advising. sodium and saturated fat were main reasons tha...
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Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... respectively. Additionally, added sugar stood for 19% made it inferior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96954314721 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50720315585 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593908629442 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9966345065 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102991380815 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045206197555 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432737958953 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784947375222 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252770437522 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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