Nowadays students were found to be less active, when they are free than before. Some people argue that sports lessons should be mandatory in schools; I completely agree with the statement.
Firstly, modern world witnessed a hikein technological advancement and it affected children's choice of entertainment abruptly. Number of children become addicted to mobile phones and social media, eventually they gave up their physical games. As the children shows less involvement in games and physical activities, it will affect their physical and educational output marginally. This situation makes the need of sports introduction to the curriculum which will not oly help the children physically fit but also make the their brain sharper.
Currently, the childrens are influenced by passive exercises and entertainments which should be replaced by active and manual games. While playing internet games and activities the child loses concentration and will get headache. In some chances it will affect badly and even resulted in loss of vision and obesity due to sedentary lifestyle. While introducing sports activities the child become more active and find their place in group activities which can boost the team building and leadership qualities. A child become physically strong and it will affect the mental development. Physical activities will refresh the mind as the child will get a chance to get escaped for a while from boring lessons. Problem solving decision making and a lot of other traits are boosted by these kind of entertainment sessions.
Overall introducing compulsory sports in curriculum will help the child to become more active, hence proper for these will help the child in plethora of means.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41417910448 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81449908534 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0064240279 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180033023428 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642171088235 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537830932177 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119317304517 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068926055061 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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