I would not prefer to supporting this idea of making the decision by themselves over 15 years old because of some reasons. But most of the parents faced with that situation, which their children decide to make decisions themselves by their own perspective, and it is hard to pull to them.
The first reason of my thought is the children often don't know some situation's harmful results. Although, they think believing themselves is the right way, instead of following their parents until the see the result of decisions on teenage. For instance, I feel it myself on every step of my life, and now I supposed to take advice from my family.
Secondly, most of the teenagers over 15 is making decisions by their emotional on that situation. Sometimes following emotional thoughts make life better, but in another hand, it is riskier. For example, I decided to go camping with my classmates in middle school while my parents tried to stop me, but my mates drunk and fought between each other. Then I apologize to hang out with them.
As a result, I realized to make decisions with my parents is more influence than make decisions alone because of many cases like I mentioned above. So I would like to stand with the side of children doesn't make decisions themselves without any advice from their parents
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'support'?
Suggestion: support
I would not prefer to supporting this idea of making the decision by the...
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Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...son of my thought is the children often dont know some situations harmful results. A...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...like to stand with the side of children doesnt make decisions themselves without any a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i suppose, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7610619469 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56255437798 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7558188243 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8181818182 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208659862315 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872336108507 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813053234697 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138374800117 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565172473625 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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