People tend to be more competitive in modern society. Being competitive can have a major influence in many life's aspects.In my view, sense of this ability can be both beneficial and harmfull in certain situations.
A highly competitive person is often considered to be conceited and self-absored. Their relationships with the people even if relatives or romantic counterparts, usually suffer as they are unwilling to compromise when conflicts happen. the selfishment in all contacts make them worse in our vision and not able to be misconceptions in the fault belongs to them. Additionally, an intense of level of competition in a company caused by highly competitive employees can create an unhealthy environment. This type of environment enable participants to feel uncomfortable and does not promote productivity and even if making them closer to leaving the organization in search of better career path.
However, i would fairly side with those who think that competitiveness can be a positive contribution in many other instances. Competitive people always strive because of their weakness or feel not well-informed with certain expertise, they can persevere until they achieve wanted goals. For example, a sense of rivalry can boost resilient individuals to equit difficulties and encourage them to work harder. People with a competitive characteristic never give up when faced with setbacks. Furthermore, many competitive people are often competing against themselves and always putting themselves in a state of constant learning.
In conclusion, being competitive may sabotage a person's relationship with the people around them and negatively affect the workplace, so There is an undeniable fact that competitiveness allow people to be self-motivated and self-discipline . I also hold fast to the belief that people should undertand in two sides simultaneously, not too practical and too competitive, otherwise the consequences can be severe.
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- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can even be damaging To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage 56
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done 78
- Some people are born to be leaders while others believe leadership can be learnt Discuss both views and give opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59797297297 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43051215621 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.377114342 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.357142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237246279961 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829793586188 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526119593489 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141081469355 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397957354325 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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