One of the most contemporary issues that receive concerns from various parts of the world is an alarming rate of customers being confronted with commercials which are displayed due to competition among enterprises. In the following paragraphs, the effects could be analyzed with some plausible solutions being suggested.
It is can undeniable that frequent appearance of advertisements via social media and recreational reading materials have adverse impacts on customers and whole the society. First of all, businesses often invite celebrities and influencers to boost the widespread popularity of their products with market, which may lead to wasting a vast amount of money being spent on unessential items by superstar’s fans. Moreover, customers often are attracted by beautiful packaging which covers outside products, which could be associated with some environmental issues because of the customer's impulsive buying. Particularly, after unboxing, eye-pleasing plastic wrap is often thrown away, leading to the exacerbating environments. In addition, companies aim to increase sales volume, releasing a great deal of promotion and lowering product’s actual quality to reduce prices, and as a result, purchasers are deceived by subpar goods that may even carry the risk of serious mental and physical illnesses.
To avoid this phenomenon worsening, some reasonable steps should be implemented. To begin with, it is high time governments forced a strict trading censorship to put a curb on irresponsible advertisements that exist via social platforms or newspapers. Moreover, it is a worthwhile idea if all businesses heightened their acknowledgment of sustainable development in order to follow a right orientation catering for both customer’s demands and revenue requirements. Last but not least, it is beneficial for adolescents to be educated by their parents in terms of shopping and smart spending.
In conclusion, this problems could result in several consequences which require immediate attention. Only when governments, enterprises, and individuals make concerted efforts could this trend efficiently handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84294871795 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29363534368 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679487179487 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2323442527 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.230769231 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113831608989 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362654542269 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290847657955 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606481890572 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372329944499 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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