Nowadays, population is a great concern in all over the world. There are numerous reasons behind this increasing difficulty. In spite of this I do not consider it as a greatest problem from which human being are suffering, as there are several major problem are growing across the globe.
The foremost reason of growing population is that the lackings of family planning. In developing countries every parents are having more than three or four children because they do not know about the family planning and take as much child as they want. That is why population of whole global is increasing by day by day. On top of this want of male children among the parents are also a major reason for this problem. Some parents think that the female child is a burden for them, as they need lots of extra care and after builds up the parents have to take the responsibility as well as every cost, say, marriage, education and so on. They do not want this kind of thing to suffer; so, they feel the need of male child. If they born female child instead of male, they took more and more child until getting a boy. As a result, the population is increasing.
On the other hand, despite having over population problem as a great difficulty, there are another major concern is global warming. In recent years, governments of every nations are taking various steps to overcome this problem, because it can harm our total earth. The rising emission of carbon dioxide and hazardous gases from large industries and vehicles making whole world warmer then before. As the world is getting hotter, the ice is being melt and it may cause to rise the sea level. Provided that the sea level rise, the people and countries staying the coastal area might go underwater. To tackle this problem, the government of every nations are taking actions, because it is a greatest problem.
In a nutshell, lack of family planning and need of male children are the reason for increasing population problem. however, global warming is also a great concern throughout the globe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...n spite of this I do not consider it as a greatest problem from which human being...
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Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...e suffering, as there are several major problem are growing across the globe. The fo...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'by day'.
Suggestion: by day
...opulation of whole global is increasing by day by day. On top of this want of male children a...
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Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...ey feel the need of male child. If they born female child instead of male, they took...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... and vehicles making whole world warmer then before. As the world is getting hotter,...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rising'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: rising
... the ice is being melt and it may cause to rise the sea level. Provided that the sea le...
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Line 5, column 688, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...tions are taking actions, because it is a greatest problem. In a nutshell, lac...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ason for increasing population problem. however, global warming is also a great concern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, well, kind of, as a result, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75842696629 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4362792085 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2559146969 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1578947368 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2076783342 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671327127371 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614745874456 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141702431253 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824513033131 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.