Nowadays, population is a great concern all over the world. There are numerous reasons behind this increasing difficulty. In spite of this I do not consider it as the greatest problem from which human being are suffering, as there are several major problems are growing across the globe such as global warming.
The foremost reason of growing population is that the lackings of family planning. In developing countries every parents are having more than three or four children because they do not know about the family planning and take as much child as they want. That is why population of whole global is increasing by day by. On top of this want of male children among the parents are also a major reason for this problem. Some parents think that the female child is a burden for them, as they need lots of extra care and after builds up the parents have to take the responsibility as well as every cost, say, marriage, education and so on. They do not want this kind of thing to suffer; so, they feel the need of male child. If they gave birth a female child instead of male, they took more and more child until getting a boy. As a result, the population is increasing.
On the other hand, despite having over population problem as a great difficulty, there are another major concern is global warming. In recent years, governments of every nations are taking various steps to overcome this problem, because it can harm our total earth. The rising emission of carbon dioxide and hazardous gases from large industries and vehicles making whole world warmer than before. As the world is getting hotter, the ice is being melt and it may cause to riseing sea level. Provided that the sea level rise, the people and countries staying the coastal area might go underwater. To tackle this problem, the government of every nations are taking actions, because it is the greatest problem.
In a nutshell, lack of family planning and need of male children are the reason for increasing population problem. However, i believe, global warming is the greatest concern throughout the globe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...increasing population problem. However, i believe, global warming is the greatest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80277777778 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43918468214 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505555555556 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2600599704 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214822422 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695807135531 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561899805638 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149901655171 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698365708588 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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