World’s population has been growing rapidly for previous decades and many countries are already struggling with its negative side effects. If the world’s population continues to rise with the current pace, we will certainly face many virulent issues.
The continued growth of the earth’s population can be attributed to several factors. Poverty plays an important role since the indigent tend to have more offspring. More babies for poor families means more workforce, thus more products produced and more income is generated. At times, due to financial gains parents are in favor of their children’s early marriage, which means faster population growth as these children form their own families and have their own kids. One other important factor is lack of education, being the root of poverty, it causes people to be unable to control the size of their families.
If the population growth is not monitored then people would face many problems. Poverty would grow as more people are born. It becomes increasingly challenging to provide healthcare for everyone and everywhere especially in the rural areas. This means malignant diseases might become rampant and become a serious threat. As a result, governments must take action and help their poor population by various means such as educating them and subsidizing essential products, that they consume, in order to wrest control of population growth.
Results of unstoppable population growth can be catastrophic and the majority of this problem can be solved by the effective actions of the government. They can raise awareness and allocate more budget to education so that this adverse problem is avoided or alleviated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...ve more offspring. More babies for poor families means more workforce, thus more product...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... control the size of their families. If the population growth is not monitored ...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'providing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: providing
...rn. It becomes increasingly challenging to provide healthcare for everyone and everywhere ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43018867925 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83824262837 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.724106088 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141569443924 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497274412749 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556383174121 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902977767647 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413606167161 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.