It is certainly the case that fast foods is having high dominance over customary foods everyone eat nowadays, for access of food is no longer following the ordinary means generally, as the trend is prevailing where it goes without saying to be an instant and easy way.
Although fast food may not be suitable for all ages, especially the elderly, there are favourable effects for the teengaers and adults, who are going through a hectic and busy schedule in their life. As a result of a high number of youngsters and kids who are keen on going to a wide range of foodstores, McDonalds’, KFC. Thus, the popularity of consumers raised the trend of these stores which is viewed to be an indispensable part in teenagers’ eyes.
In addition, not until the foods are readily accessible for people to look for, it wouldn’t be a chance of the earning of food stores raised. It goes without saying that it is always a vital factor for foods to have a proper processing as that in the past, yet, foods access has to meet the present needs and standards, which has to be improved well compared to the past, so as to earn an extra profit more significantly than before, which is then considered to be a successful improvement for both workers and the company as well.
In conclusion, fast foods stores is conducive to society as a whole, consumers and stores themselves are equally seen to be favourable as a result. Undeniably, the old ways in food processing will never be seen in the present market.
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 71
- The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. 61
- The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.You should write at least 150 words. 73
- The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and a plan for proposed changes. 61
- The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and a plan for proposed changes. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ber of youngsters and kids who are keen on going to a wide range of foodstores, McDonald...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... be improved well compared to the past, so as to earn an extra profit more significantly...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, then, thus, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72452830189 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83138591029 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543396226415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.9367139667 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.5 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155040648464 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077480054608 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540030414671 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107813920525 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042530825938 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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