Air travel is definitely an amazing experience that everyone should enjoy once in their life time. The cost of flying has been drastically decreasing over the past few years and thus, more people are travelling abroad in flights. Personally, I feel that this trend has more benefits, but still I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of it in this essay.
Although there are many significant advantages of air travel, I feel faster transportation and contribution towards a country's economy are the most crucial ones. Earlier, when people had to travel through Waterways, they wasted a considerable amount of time in travelling, and as a result, they got less time for exploration. However, as travelling by plane is the fastest mode of transportation, it helps people in reducing their travel time, which they can utilize for visiting more foreign places. In addition to that, due to the low flying cost, both the upper as well as the middle stratum of society are travelling overseas to fulfill their dreams. Indeed, this helps the government as well as many industries associated with tourism. Hotels and tourism agencies, for instance, earn most of their income through foreign visitors and thus, it increases the Gross Domestic Product of a country.
However, many people contend that there are a few issues associated with increased air travel. First of all, some people advocate about the air pollution and air traffic that impact the environment. They opine that as more people travel in flights, the level of carbon emissions have been increasing and as a result, the environment is being affected detrimentally. Apart from this, during this coronavirus pandemic, when people travel across the globe, they are prone to the disease and can spread it to other countries as well. People from China, for instance, when travelling to Singapore during this pandemic, the number of coronavirus cases in Singapore surged.
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks of increased air travel, I personally feel that it helps people to travel faster and aids countries' economy. Hence, the advantages of air travel outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, well, apart from, as to, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22988505747 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83082003659 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522988505747 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3363540298 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249857321969 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880119375962 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803889701866 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173567353204 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103082865802 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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