There is no doubt of saying that food is a fundamental need which could be fulfilled only by the optimum food supply. In order to fulfill it, a number of problems occur regarding to maintain the demand level of people. I will examine the causes of this problem and possible ways that need to be considered.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons which are mainly responsible to raise the food demand. First and foremost, production level of any food considerably depends upon the consumption level. When the number of consumer increases with it’s consumption, the demand is also likely to have growth. Which later imbalances the food demand badly. Less involvement towards farming could be another factor because majority of people to farming consider as a counterproductive exercise, not profit gaining. This tendency also affects to sustain the production of food for the world market ultimately decreases the food supply.
As far as causes of this problem are concerned, the ways are also taken into consideration. International authorities need to monitor the demand and supply chain timely. This practice does not only to maintain the food demand at certain level, but also to ensure the optimum production level. Organic farming is one of effective solution the meet with the demands of people, and this notion international communities need to bring in their mind to stop being viewed scarcity in food resources.
In conclusion, growing more and more foods by adopting new methods of farming and adjusting the balance between demand and supply the food demand crisis could be postponed in the entire world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e demand is also likely to have growth. Which later imbalances the food demand badly....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, regarding, so, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76962071376 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.04079603 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276514775925 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102223720702 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515308581333 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176822854774 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371502496975 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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