There is a major increase in the usage of fossil fuels for industries. As, the demand for oil and gas has been increased to be located in remote and untouched areas. This statement is true to large extend. The pros and cons will scrutinize in the upcoming paragraphs to strengthen my points.
On the brighter side, the establishment of gas and oil companies is beneficial for residents. As, larger the installation of companies more will be the demand for labour. This provides great employment opportunities which automatically raise the quality of life. The chores included in the sectors are production of goods and many more. This is mainly occur in developing regions to make them developed. Hence, the formation of oil and gas companies expected to be higher in untouched areas.
On the contrary, one major demerit of this development is the detrimental effect on the habitat of remote areas. For instance, countries who want to drill in regions like Antratica, have a great population of glaciers and animals like penguin and polar bears. This development of oil and gas industries can cause to habitat of that particular area. One another reason is adverse effect on environment. As, the emission of harmful gases like carbon-dioxide can cause air degradation on large scale. Therefore, some eco-friendly ways like wind and sun can be used to reduce these hazardous effects.
In conclusion, from the above discussion, it is clear that the establishment of oil and gas companies have more demerits than merits as, it affects the climate and habitat worstly.
- Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets Still there are robberies that happen inside houses What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his her own security Use specific reasons and examples to support yo 61
- In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food This has negative effects on both families and societies To what extend do you agree or disagree 67
- The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Many efforts has been made by countries to address challenges concerning the environment but the situation has not improved What are the possible reasons for environment degradattion are there any solution to combat 84
- Many efforts has been made by countries to address challenges concerning the environment but the situation has not improved What are the possible reasons for environment degradattion are there any solution to combat 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'occurred'.
Suggestion: occurred
... of goods and many more. This is mainly occur in developing regions to make them deve...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eason is adverse effect on environment. As, the emission of harmful gases like car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1007751938 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93550855972 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9611572215 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4117647059 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226750238883 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732863455755 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805013310794 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14011074511 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723272660014 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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