During the advancement in computer technology the trend of working from home will bring a Dramatic change to people lives. It's positive or negative development. Give your opinion and example
In able- bodied, the role of doing task from house will be a dramatic change to an individual lifestyle. I will discuss optimistic and disadvantages of this essay in my upcoming paragraphs with my opinion.
To begin with, in the techno era, if anyone will do work at home to use computer for different sort of working such as; online shopping, bill payment, and so on. While computer is elegant technique to people lives because it can change life style and, it is time convince so that an individual mostly young ones will have benefit of this device to could use own purpose for study, training as well as filling electronic form for vaccancies.the united state of America communities could run out business through e - commerce application so that who has been used computer device in home to earn a large chunk of money it is good example to show that an individual totally relie on computer in the future to doing something online on computer not going in the market.
Turning on flip side, in advancement Anyone may doing any office related work at home it becomes incline rampant disease in human body. If people would spend ought time on computer and don't take care of health so who has suffer from chronic disease like as; tumour cancer, cervical pain and so on. Because of computer an individual might sloppy and trafficking of artificial websites. In these days , offense also peevelance roots through computer virus and chat potters so that they will take fallacious decision and waste of facile to access online service through computer advancement.
To recapitulate, in my opinion if computer technology have an plethora of benefit but other side it has an enormous drawbacks but It's depend upon society how to use technology because most people say that technology is elegant but as well as master of dangerous.
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- Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization's success. While other think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discusboth views and give your opinion. 67
- Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization's success. While other think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discusboth views and give your opinion. 61
- Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization's success. While other think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discusboth views and give your opinion. 61
- It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education cans sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools . What do you think? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, sort of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88461538462 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63038046208 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599358974359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.892587129 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.333333333 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214734039058 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877070465605 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308077689345 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129834650367 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00842265083885 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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