The environment we live in is in danger. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this?
Nowadays, the question “who is responsible for environmental crisis?” has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that considering some efficient methods to preserving the ecosystem is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must propose numerous solution to maintain environment.
To begin with, it is a common view that finding the causes of environmental polution plays a vital role in each society. First and foremost is that the toxic gases are emited from destructive vehicle as well as the lethal gases are spreaded from factories can be the most crucial crisis of the environment. Secondly, it can be argued that the increasing range of heat in the world leads to melting the ice caps in both poles and subsequently, the sea level will be raised. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that an extensive range of health problems, such as skin cancer that are proceed from destruction of ozone layer can be another challenge. A group of environmentalists, working at prestigious universities conducted that sea and rivers are being contaminated by harmful chemicals.
However, there is no doubt that some steps should be taken to address these problems. One possible solution is to encourage people to leave their private cars at home and use the public transport systems. The other alternative solution is that the government should persuade the factories to move to less beautiful area by offering loans. Lastly, it is necessary the government put investment to equipt comprehensive transport systems and provide convenient vehicles as well as eco-friendy fuels.
To recapitulate, I entirely believe that some useful action must be taken into account to eliminate the environmental crisis. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legistlation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... environmental crisis?' has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'proceeded'.
Suggestion: proceeded
... problems, such as skin cancer that are proceed from destruction of ozone layer can be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33546325879 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11265741791 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607028753994 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3526965456 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.461538462 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0345772746544 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0114690753108 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225679116352 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0191019968093 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206684216492 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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