Essay topics: Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is a widely held view that music, one of the greatest forms of art, is considered to be the bridge which can connect people of different nationalities and age groups. In my opinion, I agree that music is a good way to bring people together, however, I think that sports can do that in a better way.
First of all, music festivals are the best example to show how music can bring humans together. Regardless of nationality or religious beliefs, if someone loves music, then he can attend them. From my own experience, I have been in a huge music celebration like this and I felt that all of us were equal and same and that the love of music brought us closer.
Secondly, great bands from the past, like Rolling Stones and their influence in music still brings the older fans close to youngers. Several times I have seen in music stores old people telling stories to teenagers about concerts that they have been. This is how music is able to bring different age groups together.
However, the lack of frequent music festivals and the significant decline in the quality of songs today are the main reasons that i believe that sports bring people easier close. To explain that, almost every day international sports events are happening, such as Champions League in football and etc in others, events where it can be seen that there are people from all around the world.
Another example of how sports are able to to bring people together is the Olympic Games. Since 500 b.c. in ancient Athens, athletes from all over the known world then were participating in the games for glory and power, but the most important is that during the games all the wars had to stop. So this event was able to bring opponents together for a small duration. That was the glory of Olympic Games.
In conclusion, both music and sports can unite people and bridge the gap between different cultures and age and are essential for our daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6472303207 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35793919812 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533527696793 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0549031897 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.266666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287207993015 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106200269798 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956434703441 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159563056191 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874547694074 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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