Environment of planet is deteriorating due to human activities in recent years, such as consuming fossil fuel, disposing wast irresponsibly and exploiting minerals; and this trend will continue to become worse if humans do not take measures to solve it. This essay will discuss what governments and individuals need to do to deal with the problem.
To begin with, government ought to supersede fossil with renewable energy, like solar and hydro power. In last thirty years, enormous countries accelerated the pace of industrilization; therefore, consumption of energy increased dramatically. The byproduct of consuming fossil fuel causes immense pollution to atmosphere. Take China for example, approximately 90% of Chinese residents are breathing polluted air. As a solution to this severe situation, governments should reduce the proportion of energy derived from burning gas and coal and replace it with clean energy, like solar and hydro. This measure will absolutely relieve environmental problem and provide unpolluted air.
On the other hand, individuals must endeavor to protect environment in every aspect of life. One basic avenue is recycle use plastic bags. Plastic bags are major composition in waste and they barely decompose. If everyone uses recycleable bags, landfill will be less. Another effictive approach is to classfy gabege into recycleable and unrecycleable. Recycleable waste can be collected and produce now product, which reduces material and energy waste. Moreover, individuals should keep in mind to protect environment, because people are inseparatable to the environment they lived in. If the environment is polluted, people will suffer from the consequence.
To recapitulate, certain human activities renders the unsatisfactory environment. Governments and individuals must take action to resolve the problem of polluted enviornment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82545454545 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18406362327 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3817240904 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189712763463 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505646370106 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636229896745 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116576584027 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578804532528 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 50.2224549098 61% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.94 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.