Films are less important than other forms of art like literature and painting? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent times, the film industry has become a topic that has attracted much attention in society. It is generally argued that many forms of art, such as literature and painting have an important value than film. Personally, I totally disagree with this for the rationale that follows.
In the first place, it is a fact beyond dispute that films are an easy way to connect and transmit the message to people. By this, I mean that each art product has a meaning to send to viewers, but not everyone understands. To sum up, the most common way to approach the whole people of art is through film.
Another point is that nobody would think of questioning that film is an important element for entertainment. To put it differently, art is assumed as a method to release pressure in life. Many surveys have shown that the amount of people seeking a film to relax is as myriad times bigger than other types. In consequence, it is possible to see that variety of films and the development of this industry bring people an improvement in life quality. Briefly, films have a worth society and human life.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with this view since its benefit brought from film to our life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, if, so, i mean, in conclusion, such as, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70754716981 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61594774934 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589622641509 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4212628941 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225747184422 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787912224414 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725361880968 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133551590964 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683182745403 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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